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Ok, if you have any stories, oneshots or anything that you wrote, dont be shy and let us read it. Also, if you read a story/oneshot that its not writen by you, but you really like and would want to show it to us, dont hesitate! aww.gif Ill be posting some work of my on soon =3

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This is very interesting. I can't wait to read some of your work, Kayko! ^^

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Hoorayz! :D I might write a fic with all the characters from our rp! Well once I know about them and stuffs.. teehee!

-- Edited by Kirusa at 21:14, 2008-11-20

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Hey that's awesome! I'll be looking forward to your works.

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Great idea Kiru!! That would be so freakin' awsome! XD and I really need to translate my first fanfic (which happens to be about yyh XD ) and post it... i for one think it completly SUCKS! but my friends (and mom ^_^" ) think its very good... I have a lot to work, since its kinda long ^^"...oh well, I might post an old, umm mini-story, tomorrow =3

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(ok, so a story I wrote last year for a school project. It has nothing to do with anime...basically this is the only story that I wrote in english and its finished....anyway, when i wrote this my english was really bad, so sorry for the mistakes, but im to lazy to read it again and correct them...^^" I know it sucks, but oh well...)

A real story

Do you believe in fairies? Let me tell you a story that happened to me a few months ago.
It was a cold winter night when my mother died. Peter, my five year old brother, and I were devastated. I was only ten then. A few weeks later we found out that dad had to go fight in the war. What horible news! Before he left, I made a promise to him: that I would take care of Peter. He told us to be strong and that he will return as soon as posible.
I used to read to Peter. Id read him fairy-tales. He was so young that hed acctualy believed in every thing he would hear in the stories.
It was really hard for me to take care of Peter and the house, especially when we were so poor.
One day, my little brother came to me and said something that made me yell at him and make him cry:
-Alice, Alice! I saw a fairy. A real fairy!
-Oh, Peter! Grow up...There is no such things as fairies!
-But I saw one. She even spoked to me.
-Peter! Stop with all this nonsense! Fairies do not exist!!
Peter started crying and went to his room. I felt sorry for him, but he had to grow up at some point.
Peter was so mad at me he wouldnt speak to me. Until, one day, something horible happened. When I woked up in the morning, Peter was gone. I grabed my coat and went out looking for him. I was hoping he was ok and that I could find him as soon as posible, because with the snow storm outside he could freeze to death.
I shouted his name and asked people if they had seen him, but he was nowhere to find. I started runing faster and faster crying and calling his name. I was tired and really cold, but I kept on searching. I was slowly starting to lose hope. Seeing a bench near by, I sat down with my head in my hands crying softly. Mom, dad, and now Peter...I was all alone. It was like everything around me stoped. The snow was so white and bright and it was so quite. I would have flash-backs when we were all together having fun in the snow. My tear drops combined with the snow on the ground. I could hear the wind whispering my name. Looking up my heart stoped beating. My whole body warmed up and I wasnt cold anymore. I slowly started shaking, looking at something I thought it doesnt exist...A small fairy was blocking the light coming from the reflection of the snow...I was speechless and frightened. The fairy asked me to folow her. I thought I was going crazy, but I decided to go after her. Walking a few minutes, she tooked me to where my little brother was. I runed up to him, but he was benumbed. I brought him back home where I covered him with a warm blanket next to the fire. He slowly started to wake up. Through his frozen lips I could hear him saying my name. I huged him telling him everything is going to be allright and he went back to sleep.
The next day when he woked up I was in the kitchen making him something to eat. He entered the room with three words: I am sorry. Without turning I said:
-You know, Peter...You were right...I should be the one to apologize. I was trying sa hard to be more mature that I forgot how fun it is to be a kid. I was trying so hard to run away from the sadness that I didnt had time to stop and enjoy the happyness of childhood.
Peter huged me and smiled. From that day on we would pretend everyday that we were fairies and we live in a Fairy Land. We would always have so much fun. As time pased, father returned home and we lived happily, passing all dificulties with a little bit of faight, and trust...and, fairy dust.
Remember this words: If you build a wall around you to keep the sadness from reaching you, the happyness wont be able to reach you either...


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The Happiness Of Those Who Believe

Snowing with silence... emptiness... loneliness... you find yourself outside, on the street, in your car... stuck in a huge traffic jam... trying to stay calm, you turn on the radio and just listen to some beautiful carols... you just want to get home already... staring at all the people outside, you wonder... what exactly makes you happy... where exactly you stand with your feelings towards everything around you... it saddens you even more that youre aware of your sadness of not knowing how to be, who to be and why to be the way you think you should... you feel absolutely lost... you dont know what to feel and if its right to feel the way you do... the traffic light finally turns green and the cars start moving again... You thought that Christmas was a rather enjoyable Holiday until... everything changed... your whole personality changed and you just cant seem to find Happiness in any of the small things like those involving Christmas anymore... Being such an extremist you tend to explore only the most intense feelings, both good and bad... You seem to be impulsive which is only known to yourself, but you actually think twice before acting... Everyday work in this new city you hardly had time to explore is the only thing which can make you forget all your uncertainties... This pains you very much... its so hard for you to face your emptiness... thats why youre always running away... far... far away. Daydreaming a little more in pain youre almost home... you park your car in front of your house and get out... standing outside... in the chilly winter night everything seems so different... so mysteriously different that it brings up even more sadness in your eyes... Snow flakes dancing around you make you even more unconfident about yourself, yet still letting the silence around you calm you a little... you take a deep breath and decide not to go in... even thou you now exactly that everyones waiting for you... but you just cant face them... especially not today... on Christmas Eve... Letting go of this moment you start walking the other way... hoping that a little walk through the streets in the middle of the night could calm you somehow... and it truly did... you always loved taking long walks in the middle of the night... especially the cold ones... walking through the snow... through the street... through this everlasting silence... you finally have the chance to reflect on your feelings... with all your running away through working, you never had the chance to... trying to be as realistic as possible you find yourself analyzing yourself again... falling way behind with walking... you start whispering to yourself... start talking to yourself... start asking yourself if this fear of failing as a human being will ever stop... this uncertainty is so heartbreaking for you... youd rather seize to exist or be reborn as a stray cat, than live another day in this uncertainty... but you know that your exaggeration skills are very expanded... so you often think in all possible directions just for the sake of not missing something... this day gave you a headache... a heartache also... with Christmas and all on your mind... you can hardly decide what to think of first... noticing that youre completely alone on the street you continue whispering to yourself... looking at the beautifully gold shining street lights you take another deep breath again and continue walking... with no certain destination you keep on walking down the streets through your souls silence and snow... shivering a little you find yourself asking where this terribly long street would end... you feel like youve been walking for hours through these empty streets searching for yourself but still wondering through the dark alleys of your soul... you find yourself asking something again... you need to know if the perfection you crave for so long could truly be achievable... always caring about what people think about you, how to be, what to do and about all this insecurity caused by all of this, you really seem to be so terribly indecisive that you cant even be yourself... whatever that may be like... since you were just a child you craved for the appreciation of the ones you loved and truly cared about and of everyone else you knew... but even thou you might have not felt any appreciation coming from anyone near you, you never gave up trying to do whatever you can to please people around you... mostly you even preferred hurting yourself than hurting others around you... all these questions in your heart are normal... as of course this thirst of yours to know absolutely everything about yourself and trying to understand yourself perfectly... you find yourself so hard to explain, that you sometimes end up thinking less of yourself and more of the fact that your straying character is the cause of your uncertainty... Deepend in all your thoughts you didnt even realize that you stopped minutes ago, dreamily glancing at a beautiful cathedral right in front of you... You never expected the street to end with a cathedral, which somehow made you want to go inside... the cathedral was so beautiful like youve never seen any other before... The internal decoration simply made you feel... so certain... so safe... so absolutely perfect inside that nothing else could ever equate this wonderful stunningly feeling... You sat down on the bench nearest to you and just continued looking around... you felt so good inside, like you werent alone anymore with your feelings... the warm light around you was so stupefying that you simply couldnt resist coming nearer until you were facing all the sacred images... you didnt even notice that you were alone in the cathedral... all you cared about was this holy ambiance, which simply left you breathless... You suddenly kneeled down in front of the burning candles... you were surrounded by this warmth, which made all the snow flakes which survived in you hair melt... letting out a barely hearable sigh, you closed your eyes and just started thinking about everything you had on your mind... you never had the chance to simply let everything out... you sometimes visited churches, but that was it... you never prayed or had any conversations with god in the church... you gathered so much pain and loneliness in your soul, that you were absolutely right to feel this uncertainty... but now that you finally had the chance to let it all out, to release all the unimaginable pain you felt all these years... you were so enthusiastic about everything... that you hardly knew where to begin... when you finally had some kind of order in your thoughts... a voice startled you... it sounded so divine... but as you stood up slowly turning around looking right into that persons eyes... you could tell that he was a priest just by looking at him... you just smiled and walked towards him... passing him... you almost went out the door... when he said smiling with a divine warm voice... The Happiness Of Those Who Believe... Truly Believe In Themselves And Know That Theyre Never Alone, Where Ever They Might Be... Their Feelings Will Be Always Percepted By God So What Ever Thought You Might Share He Already Knows It... Wanting To Find Yourself So Desperately You Came To The Only Place You Thought You Could Finally Release Your Souls Sorrows... Now That You Stepped Into The Light Your Darkness Falls Behind And Your Burdens Vanish Into Oblivion... Sometimes We Simply Need A Cold Winter Night Even Christmas Eve To Realise Where We Stand... his words made you feel so much better, that you simply couldnt stop smiling... You turned around and said with a smile, which made you look like youve been reborn like a divine Phoenix, which has risen from his ashes... Thank you for your Guidance...... you took a last deep breath and walked into a new world... a new life...


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Amazing! Those were so deep... I loved them, Chinatsu! ^^ You did such an awesome job, please post more if you have any... I love reading them! ^_^

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These were great! Keep up the good work. :)

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Thanks u guys :) right now im working on a naruto story. i havent worked on it in a long time, but if u want i can post what i have untill now. ^^

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Ooo wow those were SO fricken' good! :O I could NEVER write that well! D': Teehee, yush you should post more!

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You could post it if you'd like, I loved reading your work! ^^

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oki doki ^^ Ill post the first chapter tomorrow cuz now it ìs really late and i cant seem to find the story XD ... oh and: ITS WEEKEND!....*ahem* i just had to do that, sorry XD

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Haha, that's perfectly fine! ^_^ And hooray! Ah, weekends truly are the best~ Hehe. ^^

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YUSH! You said it! Without the weekends I would totally die! D:

-- Edited by Kirusa at 23:13, 2008-11-28

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THE WAY OF THE NINJA

Chapter 1 Meeting New People
It was a wonderful morning when me and my two best friends arrived in Konoha. We went to the Hokage in search for an appartment and on our way to her office we stoped a bit at the Ramen Bar were we bought something to eat. Finally we got to the Hokages office. We went inside and introduced ourselfs. She gave us the keys to our new house and welcomed us to the village. We kinda got lost searching for our house, but finally managed to find it. We unpacked and quickly went to sleep because we were tired after our long journey. The next day we woke up late and went to look around the village and maybe make same new friends, since we just arrived. We went to the Ramen Bar were we meet a blonde kid around our age. HEY! My name is Naruto Uzumaki, and Im going to be the next Hokage! BELIEVE IT! You three must be new in town. Whats your name? He was a pretty loud kid, but seemed nice. I introduced myself first. My name is Nao Nagase and Im 16 years old. I come from the snow village. Im Rin Hanabi and I just turned 16. Im from the Star village. And I am Ai Chino, 17 years old. I come from the Moon Village. Nice to meet all of you! How about I show you a little around the village and introduce you to some of my friends? Naruto asked. That sounds nice. I said looking at Rin and Ai who nodded at his request.
We walked through the streets of Konoha until we arrived at the Ninja Academy where we saw a pink haired girl and a blonde girl staring at a raven haired boy who seemed annoyed by the two girls.
HEY, Sakura! Yelled Naruto waving and running towards them.
Naruto, cant you see Im busy What do you want? Said the pink haired girl.
We have three new girls that just moved to Konoha! Said Naruto excited pointing at us.
We approached them waving and smiling.
Hey there. Im Nao. This is Ai and Rin.
The pink haired girl came up to us, smiled and said:
Hey! Im Sakura Haruno. Welcome to Konoha.
Im Ino Yamanaka. And Im Sasukes girlfriend. Said the blonde girl smiling.
What do you mean by that?! Sasuke is MINE!! Said Sakura.
The two girls started arguing and fighting. The three of us sweat drop while put a forced smile on our faces.
They always do that. Just ignore them. Said Naruto rolling his eyes. Anyway, this is Sasuke Uchiha. The boy those two are fighting over. Continued Naruto pointing at the raven haired boy.
Hi. Was the only thing Sasuke said before he got up and left, with the two girls following him.
Anyway, let me show you guys the training grounds. Maybe well find more people there, training. Said Naruto before starting running to what seemed the training area. There we met and made a lot of new friends.
We met Hinata Hyuuga, a shy girl who seemed to like Naruto. Even though I dont think he realizes that. Anyway, I think Hinata and Rin will be great friends since theyre both kind of shy. We also met Hinatas cousin, Neji Hyuuga, a really weird guy named Rock Lee who kept talking about youthness, Choji Akimichi, a lazy guy that was sleeping under a tree named Shikamaru Nara and a quite guy with glasses named Shino Aburame. They all welcomed us to the village.
Thank you everybody! We must get going now. Said Ai smiling.
Oh man! Do we have to? I want to stay and know them better! I said crossing my arms over my chest.
We need to feed Furu and Haiiro. Answered Rin.
Oh, fine. Bye everyone! See you all tomorrow. Oh, and, thanks Naruto for showing us around. I said with a wink.
Naruto smiled and waved while we heeded back home. Furu was waiting for me, and Haiiro was waiting for Rin. We fed them, and apologizes it took us so long.
From now on, you can come with me where ever I go, ok? I said to Furu smiling while she was wagging her tail.
You too, Haiiro! You dont need to stay home alone. Said Rin to Haiiro.
Later that evening I went out to walk Furu. It was so quite and calm in the park, and the moon was shining so brightly. All of a sudden I saw a big white dog jumping from the bushes and landing on me. He started wagging his tail and licking my face. I giggled and strugled to get him off of me.
Easy there big boy? Where did you come from? I asked without expecting an answer.
He escaped from me. Akamaru, come here. Said a boy coming towards me. Im sorry for that. He doesnt usually do that. He added.
Thats okay. I answered smiling.
Im Kiba Inuzuka, and this is Akamaru. You must be new in the village. Said the boy with a big smile and the dog barked at the hearing of his name.
Yeah, I just arrived here yesterday. My names Nao Nagase and this is Furu. I said smiling back and pointing at Furu.
Nice to meet you Nao. You to Furu. Well, I got to run. See you around. Said Kiba waving and taking off.
I smiled and waved back. After that we went back home and went to bed.
The next day we had to wake up early in the morning because it was Monday and we had to go to school. Ninja school to be more precise. Once we got there we met Naruto, who showed us the way to our classroom. We saw there all the people that we met yesterday and a few new people. We introduced Furu and Haiiro to our friends who awed and pet them. While we were sitting in some desks that were free, talking with Naruto, Hinata and Neji, I heard a bark behind me and when I turned around a saw Akamaru trying to jump on me again.
Hi there boy. How are you? Said I. Akamaru barked twice as if saying Im fine.
Hey Nao! Said Kiba with a big grin on his face.
Mornin Kiba. I replied smiling petting Akamaru.
Who are your friends? Asked Kiba looking over at Ai and Rin
Oh, right! This is Rin, and thats Ai. And that over there is Haiiro, Rins companion. I answered.
After a few minutes, a sensei came in, that we found out later his name was Iruka Umino, with a new sensei named Mikawa that was assigned to be our sensei.
Listen up everybody! As you all know, we have three new students. Nao, Rin and Ai. Their teacher will be Miss. Mikawa Suruno and all together will form team 13. Announced Iruka sensei
Hey. Said Mikawa sensei.
Now everybody, lets all go to the training grounds and stay with your team until all of your sensei get there. Added Iruka sensei before leaving.
Once we got there, even though Iruka sensei said to stay with out team, everyone was moving around talking to each other. I noticed how Ai was getting along pretty well with Neji. Even though they didnt talk to much to each other, they were both the silent type and just stood aside watching everybody else. I was really happy for Rin though. She made good friends with Hinata. At first I didnt though she would make friends so quick because she is so shy, but now just looking at her, having fun with Hinata makes me smile on the inside and outside. I was happy for both Rin and Ai, they were like my sisters and I loved them very much.
I was sitting next to a tree playing with Furu when Kiba made his way next to me with Akamaru. The two dogs started playing and we both laugh.
They seem to like each other. Said Kiba still laughing.
Yeah, their having a lot of fun together. I answered looking at Kiba and smiling.
After a few minutes in which we didnt said anything, Kiba broke the silence asking:
Um, next week its Akamarus birthday, and Im throwing him a party. I was thinking, maybe Furu and you would like to come? And your friends to? said Kiba a bit nervous.
We would love to! I answered with a big smile on my face. Wouldnt we, Furu? I added and Furu barked in agreement.
I could see the overwhelming on Kibas face, and Akamaru was almost doing flips in the air. I thanked Kiba for the invite and we both went to our teams since all the senseis were now there.
I found out that Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura were all in the same team, team seven.
The senseis divided us and our team had to fight against Asumas team, team ten: Ino Yamanaka, Shikamaru Nara and Choji Akimichi. Ai vs. Ino, me vs. Shika, as I like to call him, and Rin vs. Choji. Ai and Ino went first. They both went into a fighting stance and waited for the start signal from Iruka sensei.
Hajime! yelled Iruka and the two started running towards each other, and as if they read each others mind they pulled out some shuriken and threw them. Ai jumped into the air, saving herself from the weapons. Ino crouched and dodged them.
It seemed they were both at the same level. They kept fighting for almost an hour, neither of them managing to hit the other. They just kept wasting they energy without using their special jutsu. They sticked to weapons and ninja skills. The fight ended when Ai tripped Ino making her fall hard on the ground knocking her out.
Next were Rin and Choji-kun. It was a long battle, but Choji won when he used his special jutsu. Now it was one on one.
It took a while until they woke up Shika-kun, but finally we both went into our fighting stance waiting for the start signal. Shikas expression was now serious and he was actually concentrating on the fight.
Iruka sensei gave the signal and we just stood there. It had pasted about ten minutes and we still hadnt moved from that position.
What the heck are you guys doing?! yelled Naruto. We didnt move but just kept staring at each other. Then I disappeared and reappeared behind Shika. Just when I was about to put the kunai at his neck I suddenly couldnt move my body. I then knew it was his shadow possession jutsu. He slowly turned around with a smirk on his face. I tried to move my arm but it was useless. He took the kunai from my hand swirling around licking his lips.
I knew what was coming next, so I gathered a big amount of chakra managing to free myself from his trap and disappear in thin air. They all looked around for me but I was nowhere to be found. All of a sudden everything started to froze around them. The trees, the bushes, the rockseverything was covered in ice. A cold wind came while Rin and Ai had a smirk on their faces. A small snow tornado formed and I appeared from it. It got so cold by now that everyone could see their own breaths. They were all amazed by what I had just done, and Shika started to have a slight worried expression on his face.
Let the fun begin. I said with a smirk from Shikas expression. I formed some icicles shaped like kunais and sent them towards my opponent. He easily dodged them, but that was just merely a distraction. As soon as he jumped he was captured into a snow tornado similar with the one before. I threw some ice kunai right when I released him from my tornado letting him fall on the ground and stopped the kunais right in front of his neck. His eyed went wide as he didnt have time to recover from the dizziness made by the tornado.
Nao wins this match! yelled Iruka sensei, as it was clearly no possible way for Shika to survive if I hadnt sopped those ice kunai.
Team 13 is the winner, and as all the teams that had won today, you will get tomorrow off. Added Iruka sensei with a smile. I made the kunais disappear and helped Shika-kun up. What a drag he murmured under his breath going back to his team. The winner teams were team 7, team 8 and our team. We all agreed to get together tomorrow and have some fun around Konoha. Well, all except Sasuke-kun and Shino-kun, but we managed and convinced them to come and meet with us the next day, on the bridge at 9 a.m.
K you guys, see you all in the morning! I said taking off with Rin and Ai waving to all of them while they waved back.
When we got home Furu was really excited and couldnt wait until tomorrow to see and play with Akamaru. While we were changing and getting ready for bed, I said:
Rin, you like Shika-kun a warm smile appeared on my face while saying that. Rin blushed like mad.
Thats not true! I dont like Shikamaru! Hes only a friend! yelled Rin upset about what I had just said. Ai crossed her arms over her chest, closing her eyes and smirking while saying:
Rin, its kind of obvious you like him more that a friend
A vein of anger appeared on Rins temple and she blushed even more. She looked at the ground and mumbled something under her breath.
What? Speak louder. I said approaching Rin.
OK! I admit it! I LIKE HIM! yelled the girl, tears forming at the end of her eyes. Ai and me both hugged her tight.
Its ok to like him. Hes a really nice guy. Not to mention really smart. said Ai smiling at Rin.
You should tell him that you like him tomorrow! I added with a big grin on my face.
What?! No way! I dont want him to find out snapped Rin, but them almost whispering the last phrase.
Why not? I really think you should tell him, because I think he likes you too I replied with a wink. She hugged us and asked:
But how am I supposed to tell him? Hell probably say its drag and that Im a troublesome girl her confidence fading away.
Dont worry Rin! Well help you! I answered her with my big grin still on my face.
Andhow are we going to do that? asked Ai with a questionable expression on her face.
Yeah, how can you guys help me? added Rin with the same expression upon her figure.
WellheheI, dont know, yethehe a sweat drop appeared, while I answered scratching the back of my head. Ill think of somethingbut for now, lets get some rest, k girls? I added tucking myself in bed.
K, night said Ai. Good night. added Rin. And with that we all three, well, five actually went to sleep.


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OMGEE~~~ I loved it! :DD Teehee, it was such a cute story! ^.^

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O_O Oh wow, I agree with Kiru! That was such a cute story~ You are such an amazing writer, Chinatsu! ^^ I also loved how all their personalities were perfect! Haha, you always do such an awesome job!

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Nice! I liked the way it was written. Great job Chinatsu!

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Thanks you guys! *hugz* now that i read it again it seems kinds lame XD...but if u guys say its ok, ill trust u ^^

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Of course~ -Hugs back- ^^ Haha, I honestly thought that it was wonderful! You write so well, Chinatsu!

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Chapter 2 More then just friends?

The next day we woke up pretty early. Maybe because we were really exited about the hole day off thing. Imagine, no training, no hard work, no sweatjust having fun with our friends.
Just as we got up, Akamaru stated barking from next door. He was probably more exited then we were.
God! Akamaru could wake up the hole village I said heading to the bathroom rubbing my eyes. I took a shower, a pretty cold one, just to wake up better. I brushed my teeth and went down to take breakfast. Ai and Rin already started so I pulled a chair and started eating.
So Rin, you ready to confess your feelings to Shika? I asked while chewing my cereals. Rin almost spilled the milk but then answered.
YeahWhat ever you say Nao getting up and putting the empty bowl in the sink and washing it.
Did you thought of a way that Rin can tell him? asked Ai also getting up and doing the same as Rin with the empty bowl.
Actually, yeah! I have a perfect plan! I said grinning and getting up also washing my now empty bowl.
Anyway, Ill tell you on the waylets hurry or well be late! I added heading upstairs to change.
We went to the bridge where we found Sasuke with Sakura on his back, Hinata and Shino. Now we would have to wait for Naruto and Kiba with Akamaru. Not after a while, Kiba and Akamaru showed up, but it took Naruto way to much to arrive so we just went to Ichiraku without him. After a hour or so he finally showed up at the ramen bar panting.
HEY, guys! I was searching for you at the bridge he said between breaths. Why did you left without me? he asked pouting.
HnYou were taking too long, stupid. Its already noon! answered Sasuke crossing his arms over his chest.
Anyway, now that were all here, lets do something fun. By the way, Naruto, heres your bowl of ramen. Now hurry up and finish it so we can get going. I said, pushing the bowl of ramen in front of Naruto.
In just a flash, the bowl was empty. Me and Kiba started laughing and now we could finally head to the park.
Arriving there, Furu, Akamaru and even Haiiro started playing together in the tall grass. We all took a seat on the ground near a tree and started talking. Sasuke was lying on the tree trunk, arms crossed and Shino wondered off playing with his bugs.
SoWhat do you guys do for fun here in Konoha? I asked stretching on the grass.
Well, theres not that much to doWe dont usually get days off you knowanswered Naruto.
While we were talking about random ninja stuff, I noticed Rins sad expression, and Ai hit me with her elbow in the ribs signalizing our sad friend. I remembered about the hole Rin / Shika liking thing and also my perfect plan that I came up with to help Rin with Shikamaru.
Ai and me got up helping Rin up saying: Sorry guys, we just remembered we have to do some some quick shoppingyeah! So, well just see you later, and maybe we could go to the springs tonight, seeing its such a hot day
Oh, okthat sounds good! Is it ok if we meet here at seven p.m. first? asked Kiba.
Sure, we dont know were the springs are anyway, so yeah. I answered smiling.
Cmon Furu, Haiiro! said Ai. So we exited the park and Ai and Rin stopped me.
So? Whats your master plan, genius? asked Ai smirking. I stuck my tongue at her and answered:
Well, Team 10 is training today, right? So that means theyre at the training grounds! We go there, find Shika, andvoila! Rin can confess her feelings! I said with a big grin, proud of my great plan. Ai and Rin made an anime fall.
Thats your plan?! Idiot We need a plan to give Rin courage and the opportunity to tell him, not were we can find him, you baka! Ai snorted.
Geez, calm downIts not that easy to come up with a plan like that, you know I replied sticking my tongue out again.
Guys, I appreciate you helping me, but, lets just head back and forget about itI wont be able to tell him anyway interrupted Rin hanging her head sounding sad.
Never!! I yelled punching the air with my fist with a big smile on my face. Ai rolled her eyes, but chuckled at my hyperness. Lets head for the training areaIll think of something on the way there. Now lets hurry! I added taking off. Once there, we hided behind some bushes and spotted Shika and his team training with Asuma-sensei.
You guys wait hereIll be right back! I said getting up, running to Asuma. Neither Shika, Ino or Choji saw me, and Rin with Ai were to far to hear what Asuma-sensei and I were talking. Furu came quickly after me dragging the attention of the three ninjas that were training.
I wonder what Nao-chan wants said Ino to her self.
Shikamaru, can you please come here a sec? Yelled Asuma.
What is she doing? I wish she would at least told us before running off like that sighed Ai. Rin blushed when she saw Shikamaru and was starting to worry at what I might do or say.
Shikamaru slowly dragged himself over to were Asuma-sensei and I was, hands in his pocket.
What is it sensei? He asked bored.
Nao has something to tell you. You have five minutes, then you get back to your training answered Asuma leaving.
Shikamaru turned his attention to me and waited for what I had to tell him.
Well, Shika-kunI started rocking back and forward, hands behind my back Im setting you up on a blind date! I shouted only for him to hear smiling a big smile.
What?! Shikamaru yelled making his team-mates stop in their tracks and look at us.
By now, Ai was consoling a very worried Rin.
Calm down, its not that bad I said scratching the back of my head.
What do you mean not that bad?! he kept yelling angrily.
Rin almost started crying hearing that, thinking I told Shika her feelings for him.
What did that baka Nao do now? Im going to kill her! said Ai.
Shika-kun, would you listen for a sec? I wined. Im not doing this just cause I can. This girl really likes you, baka! Besides, you look like you need a girlfriend. I said winking at him.
A really thin pink line could be seen above his nose even though his expression remained an angry one. He sighed, probably knowing he wouldnt have a choice anyway, changing his expression into a more embarrassed one saying: FineWhere and when?...
Yay! Be at my house tonight at seven. You wont regret your decision! I answered jumping once in the air, before winking at him.
Okthis is so troublesome he said before going back to training.
I went back where I left Ai and Rin and made a sign telling them to go. When we left the training area, Ai almost jumped on me strangling me.
Wow, wow, wow! Easy there! I have good news! I said putting my hands on my hips, looking proud.
What did you do? What did you tell him?? Asked Ai and Rin.
Well, RinI set you up on a blind date with him! Well, its not much of a blind date to you anymoreI answered scratching the back of my head.
You did what?! Both Rin and Ai yelled in unison.
It would be the perfect chance for you to tell himeven though he kind of like knows I replied scratching the back of my head again.
Ai slapped her forehead while I could see Rin boiling.
Nao, I am going to kill you! said Rin getting closer.
You can kill me after you go on your date I said winking and sticking my tongue out in a playful way.
Rin sighed and we all went back home. It was almost five so we decided to get Rin ready for her date. Nothing special, some jeans and a purple tank-top with some flip-flops. It was really hot out-side. Me and Ai putted on our bikini and some shorts and large t-shirts over them. We packed some towels and something to eat and drink. It was almost seven.
Do you actually think he will come? Rin asked.
I didnt had time to answer because someone knocked on the door.
Wow, hes 5 minutes early!... Ai chuckled a bit.
Go on! And have a nice night. No naughty stuff now! I said laughing a bit.
Hey! Shut up Nao!....hmpf Rin replied.
She opened the door to find a blushing Shikamaru with some flowers in his hands. He handed them to her saying:
Here, these are for you he said blushing, but Rin didnt seem to notice his, since she was to busy to hide her own blush.
UmThank you she said taking the flowers touching Shikamarus fingers when she grabbed them, making her blush furiously.
Ai and I were watching through the window giggling at how cute the two looked together. And then they took off, Shikamaru holding her hand.
Ok, I think we should be going too, Ai. I said getting up and grabbing the bag slipping in my flip-flops.
She did the same and we were off to the springs. When we got to the bridge, no one was there, so we just started looking around for the springs. We finally found it and when we got there I was tackled to the ground by Akamaru who started licking my face.
Stop! Down boy! I said between giggles.
Akamaru got off and went to play with Furu and Haiiro, which Rin left in my care for the night.
Nao! You came! shouted Naruto in my ear.
Hello to you too, Naruto. I said sarcastically.
Where is Ai and Rin? asked Naruto looking over my shoulder, apparently looking for the two girls.
Ai is over there, talking to TenTen . I answered, pointing at the two girls that were already having an intense conversation about who knows what.
And Rin? he added.
Oh, Rinwell, she couldnt come. She had todo something elseI replied trying not to giggle.
Was it that important that she had to miss all the fun? Naruto wined.
Well, actually yes. I said smiling.
Ok. Hey, wanna go for a swim? Naruto asked excited.
You bet! I answered showing the same amount of excitement.
We stopped next to a big rock were everybody else was. Some of the people were already in the water. I dropped my bag and started taking my big t-shirt off.
By the way, wheres Kiba. I just saw Akamaru, but I havent seen him. I asked starting to take my short shorts off. Naruto was starring at my bikini, and I dont think he actually got the question since he was to busy starring at my body. I smacked him over the head.
Stop starring!...So, have you seen Kiba? I asked again.
Did someone called my name? Kiba asked getting out of the water. Oh, hey Nao! You showed up! he added seeing me turn in his direction.
Hey Kiba! Nice trunks I giggled looking at his polka dotted trunks.
Thanks. He said grinning.
Hey! What about me? Naruto asked jokingly. I patted his head playfully and grinned at him. Grabbing them by the arms I asked:
So, should we go for a swim?
YES! they both shouted in unison.
I jumped into the springs, the hot water hitting my cold skin, calming me. I closed my eyes enjoying the relaxing sensation, until I heard two big splashes. I shot my eyes open to see Naruto and Kiba coming to the surface. I could easily see they were both just trying to show off. They both had big grins on their faces coming closer to me. I smiled to them and then closed my eyes again prompting my body against a big rock going a little more under the hot water letting out a little sigh of pure pleasure.
So, Nao. Are you coming to Akamarus birthday-party? asked Naruto sitting next to me on the rock.
Yeah, but I have no idea what to get him as a gift I answered sighing a bit. Kiba came next to me and prompted himself on the rock making our shoulders to slightly touch.
You dont need to get him anything. Just be there, and make sure to bring Furu, cause, I think they have something going on, if you know what I mean Kiba replied with a wink. Me and Naruto started laughing.
Yeah, I think that too. Theyre so cute together. I added smiling at Kiba. Then there was an awkward silence, and I was starting to get bored. I looked around and saw Ai with Neji, then silently chuckled to myself.
Looks like Ai is making a new friend I thought then giggled.
Whats so funny? asked Naruto and Kiba almost in unison.
Oh, nothing, nothing I answered. Then I grabbed them by their wrists and dragged them into the wather screaming: Lets swim! They both smirked and followed. I splashed Naruto then jumped on his back trying to push him under the water. He grabbed my hips and dragged me under the water with him. We both popped up panting and laughing.
Not fair I said sticking my tongue out in a playful way. Naruto just winked at me. Kiba was kinda glaring at Naruto and then suddenly disappeared under the water.
Kiba? Where I was interrupted by Naruto screaming.
Aaahh! he was pulled under by Kiba, who came back up besides me bursting into laughter. Naruto popped up with a shocked expression on his face. I tried to hold in my laughter but couldnt, so I started laughing holding onto Kibas shoulder.
Not cool, dog breath! Naruto yelled. Kiba smirked to himself seeing how he made me laugh and made a fool out of Naruto, but his smirked suddenly disappear when I went over to Naruto and brushed my fingers into his blonde, wet hair.
Oh, lighten up, Naruto. I said making him slightly blush. His goofy grin appeared, keeping the shade of pink on his cheeks, looking me in the eyes with his big blue ones that you could get yourself lost in them, asking:
Im kinda hungry What do you say if we go and get some ramen? rubbing the back of his head a bit embarrassed.
That sounds great! I was starting to get a bit hungry after all this swimming. I answered with a smile on my face.
Kiba was probably fuming right about now. Naruto was more than happy and he almost tackled me. We got out of the water and I could feel Kibas gaze on me. I turned around and looked at him. He was still in the water and had a weird expression on his face. Could he bejealous?! I felt my check grow a little hot, and saw Kiba glaring at Naruto. I swear, if those eyes could kill, Naruto would be dead five times by now. I was about to say something, but Naruto interrupted me.
Come on, get dressed. He said oh so excited and you could read on his face his happiness.
Yes Naruto, hold on I replied giggling at his excitement. Come on Kiba. Or are you gonna stay there all night? I asked grinning at Kiba. Both of their jaws dropped. Surely none of them was expecting this.
Y-YeahComing. answered Kiba shuttering and getting out of the water.
As I was drying and putting my cloths on I was thinking at the current situation.
Why was Naruto blushing when he invited me for ramen? I mean, Im his friend, he doesnt have a reason to be embarrassedAnd why was Kiba so jealous? You could read jealousy, angry and sadness in his eyes when Naruto asked me? Maybe his just being ****y and doesnt accept the fact that Naruto is getting along so well with a girl, and he isntIm never gonna understand boys I sighed as I slipped in my sandals and was ready to go.

-Kibas POV-
I couldnt believe that Naruto just did that! I was shooting him death glares and started to get a little jealous. I mean, I like Nao, a lot, and I didnt like the fact that Naruto could be spending more time with her. He could steal her from me. I was starting to get a little sad as I saw her get out of the water. She turned to face me and looked me in the eyes. I started blushing a bit and quickly turned my head looking, or glaring at Naruto. She was about to say something when Naruto spoke.
Come on, get dressed. he said with that goofy grin of his.
Yes Naruto, hold on she replied giggling. Come on Kiba. Or are you gonna stay there all night? she continued, looking at me with a grin on her face. I was in shock.
Y-YeahComing. I answered getting out of the water.
She started to dry herself with a towel and I noticed she was in deep thoughts.
I wonder what shes thinking aboutMan, she looks so hot in that bikiniWait! What am I thinking? Shes my friend. And even if I like her, I dont want to risk messing up our friendship I thought, sighing and slipping into my flip-flops.
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Aww, that was so adorable! ^^ Nao-Chan is so sweet~ Haha, and that's so cute of Kiba in his POV. ^_^

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PHWEE~~~ Awww, Naruto and Kiba has the cutest crush! Teehee, and Shika is so kewlie!

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Nice story! Great job, keep it up.

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haha, lol, thanks u guys! but i feel so embarased posting this lame story, cuz its just so...so...lame XD thats y i always stop half way through a story, i realize how stupid it came out....>_> i was thinking maybe instead of posting it (since everyone can read it and laugh at me XD) i could send it to u on request. ^^'

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Aww, it isn't lame at all, Chinatsu! I honestly thought it was wonderful to read! ^^ If you really don't want to post it though, that's perfectly fine... I could just request it to be sent to me please? ^_^

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Ooo, I would like you to send it to meh too! ^.^ Teehee, but really, the story ish great just as Misa said!

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Man, it sucks always being the last one to respond. They've already said it all, heh heh. But it'd be cool if you could send it to me too.

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Aww, dont worry ken-ken-kun ^^ it doesnt matter who posts first, its not like its a race :P *hugz* ok, so i need email address' ...u can send them as a message if u dont want to post ur email :) though i am worning u, the story is not worth reading XD *sigh*

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I most definitely agree with Chinatsu! ^^ Hehe, and I believe we should be the judges of whether it's worth reading or not! ^_^
Oh, and my email adress is soulofanobody@aol.com.

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Teehee Kenny ish so silleh! XDD;; But yush, it doesn't matter who replies first! :3 Oh oh! And my email is: sonozakisama@gmail.com!

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Thanks guys (or should I say girls?), heh heh. My email is kenseidemon@yahoo.com, but I don't check it often so if you could, maybe you could send it to me through a private message? Thanks!

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Roger that! XD I'll send it tomorrow, cuz apperantly lazyness won and 'm also really tired. XD Man, I complain alot >_<...heh, gomen! Oh, and I tried adding you KenKen-kun but it doenst let me T.T ...but I'll still send it to u through private message ^^

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That's perfectly fine, and don't apologize, Chinatsu! You aren't complaining at all. ^^

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Teehee thankies Chinatsu! Teehee yayz! :D

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Thanks Chinatsu, I really appreciate it. Oh, and . . . Do you mean adding me on Yahoo, or something else?

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Forgot to ask...did all of u recieved the story? ^^" if u did, and already opened it, please dont mind the pictures as i have drew original characters but never managed to scan them. so the pics u see there are not mine. ^^"

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Ah, that's strange... I didn't receive the story yet. ^^;;

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Oh...thats weird O.o...confuse anyway, Ill try again ^^ hope u get it this time ^^

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why couldn't i upload any picture in here?? anybody help me plz

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